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"RECOMMENDED" - A positive reading experience. This book provides the reader a satisfying experience, especially if the reader is already a fan the genre. This may not hold true for readers outside the genre. This book approaches the level of a contemporary traditionally-published book in its genre. This book met or exceeded the minimal editing quality of a traditionally published book. If spelling or mechanical errors were present, they were rare, hard to notice, and didn't detract from the novel's overall experience. The novel's structure (plot, characters, flow, dialogue, etc.) allowed reader to reasonably experience the story without unnecessary effort or distraction. The story met genre expectations, though did not necessarily bring anything new to the literary form. Click here to read more on Rule One Book Reviews rating system. TITLE: Rapture PUBLISHER: Independently Published AUTHOR: Steffen Jack GENRE(S): Literary Fiction/Horror PUBLICATION DATE: 3 March 2012 AMAZON REVIEWS/RATINGS AT DISCOVERY: 5/5.0 Star Average AMAZON KINDLE RANKING AT DISCOVERY: #1,559,151 WHY IT GOT MY ATTENTION: The author and I followed each other on X. This one has been out there since 2012 with only five reviews. The blurb didn't necessarily get my attention, but I saw nothing wrong with the sample. It had that gritty noir vibe with a great cover that matches. I feel like it hits effectively at the heart of its genre. DATE PLACED ON CANDIDATE LIST: 22 November 2025 STATUS: Reviewed 30 March 2026 The ReviewBOTTOM LINE UP FRONT - Well-written but brutal, Steffen Jack’s Rapture is a physiological horror novella akin to the 1990 film Jacob’s Ladder—but in reverse. It offers no painful journey toward redemption, only a coldly numb slide into personal damnation. If Hell had its own version of Purgatory, this would be it.
PLOT Jim is an addict and an alcoholic who exists solely for his next hit or drink. As Christmas approaches in a winter-locked town, he staggers through life—numb, poisoned, and dead inside. His only real companion is the revolver in his pocket, which he checks like a ritual after each recurring blackout. Each time he regains consciousness, the world around him has grown a little darker and colder, and the gun is missing one more round. Jim drifts through his existence like the ghost of the man he used to be—or perhaps never was. The plot follows Jim as he drifts from place to place and friend to friend in an alcohol- and drug-fueled haze, while his world shrinks and darkens. In the background, a social contagion—a suicide cult—creeps across society, claiming lives. At first it’s mere background noise, whispered about but not yet a direct threat. As the story progresses, the cult draws closer to Jim like an infection. I won’t spoil the ending, other than to say: “All ye who enter here, abandon all hope.” THEMES Rapture is unapologetically dark. On the surface, it’s a study of addiction and self-destruction. Unlike many addiction stories, which feature internal tension as the protagonist fights for a way out, Jim has already surrendered. He knows his addiction intimately but has fully embraced the darkness. One might think this lack of internal struggle would kill the necessary tension, but Steffen Jack makes it work by externalizing that conflict—something I’ll touch on in the characters section. The book takes the theme of addiction a step further into outright self-destruction. Jim is slowly killing himself, and the revolver in his pocket serves as a potent symbol of that slow suicide. The story begins with a few remaining bridges to redemption—girlfriend, job, family, friends—but these are systematically destroyed one by one. Part of Jim’s tragedy is his deliberate self-isolation. Several times, the author injects ambiguous elements that blur the line between reality and hallucination. Are these substance-fueled visions, or has the story slipped into supernatural horror? Is the suicide cult real, or is Jim already dead and descending into Hell? These questions are never answered definitively, which adds to the book’s unsettling power. You’ll have to read it yourself and draw your own conclusions. CHARACTERS Rapture is 100% character-driven, and literary/psychological horror lives or dies on believable characters. Steffen Jack mostly succeeds here. We learn little of Jim’s backstory: he’s unmarried, works a dead-end job at a trophy shop (when he bothers to show up), and lives in his hometown near his parents. His apartment is dark and cold, his town is dark and cold, and his relationships are dark and cold. Jack portrays him almost like a living zombie—covered in unhealed sores, his digestive system ruined by nonstop alcohol. He is a man without hope who has lost even the instinct to seek it. Jim stands with his toes hanging over the edge of the abyss, and the author invites the reader to take his hand as he steps over. Jim is bitter, hateful, and seething with razor-edged rage. His complete lack of hope or internal struggle was the element that bothered me most. How can a reader care about a protagonist (or anti-protagonist) who no longer cares about himself? If Jim had to carry the novel alone, it might have failed. Instead, the supporting characters externalize the missing tension and make the story work. The author provides thin backstories for Jim’s two closest companions, Tony and Natalie, focusing instead on the present moment. Rapture has no real past and no future. Natalie represents the last remnants of humanity in Jim, externalizing the inner conflict he lacks. Tony, Jim’s best (and perhaps only) friend, embodies his past and memories of better times—yet he is also an addict who fuels Jim’s downward spiral. Tony appears sporadically, and his life outside Jim’s perception remains mysterious. I wasn’t always sure whether Tony was real, a hallucination, or something supernatural. His interactions often left me questioning reality, much like the Danny Aiello character in Jacob’s Ladder. Tony serves as a dark catalyst—part divine messenger, part spiritual guide, or perhaps a schizophrenic manifestation. His pivotal late reappearance made me rethink what the book was truly about: personal self-destruction, mental illness, or supernatural horror? Natalie, a fragile waif and Jim’s girlfriend, feels like his final offramp before the gates of Hell. She is one of the most fully realized characters in the book. She seems to seek redemption through Jim as much as she offers it to him, though it’s ultimately in vain. I never fully understood why she kept returning—perhaps she simply wanted company on her own slide into the abyss. Yet she provides the story’s only dim glimmer of hope. Whenever anyone offers Jim even a taste of something beyond his personal Hell, he steps outside into the cold for another smoke and drink. Through Natalie, it becomes clear there is no going back for Jim—even if he doesn’t fully realize it. Jim’s parents still live in his childhood home, but their relationship is strained by past bitterness that’s only hinted at toward the end. As the story progresses, Jim gravitates toward home, desperately seeking comfort that no longer exists as emptiness closes in. None of these characters—Jim, Tony, Natalie, or his parents—are seeking a way out, a better life, or a break from the cycle. They’re all trapped in their own private Hells, sliding toward nihilistic oblivion with no self-awareness or desire for help. SETTING Steffen Jack crafts a blighted winter city where life and color have been sucked dry. The bleak, icy landscape becomes another character, mirroring Jim’s frozen heart. Temperature and texture are used masterfully to evoke grit, decay, and constant discomfort. Brief pockets of warmth—such as his parents’ house or Natalie’s family condo—only repel Jim until it’s too late. STYLE, PACING AND LANGUAGE The style is gritty and steeped in drug- and alcohol-fueled undertones. Abrupt scene shifts sometimes disorient the reader, heightening the discomfort. Dialogue varies—excellent in places, merely functional in others. The pacing is intentionally brutal: it spirals slowly at first, like icy water circling a drain, then accelerates toward the end without ever rushing. Though shorter than a full novel, Rapture feels weighty; its emotional impact far exceeds its page count. RECOMMENDATIONS Steffen Jack’s tale is a relentless tumble into the abyss—an unflinching exploration of nihilism, addiction, and psychological horror. I recommend Rapture to anyone who enjoys dark, literary fiction or existential horror. Do not pick this up expecting a redemption arc or happy ending. Rapture is intelligently written, with strong characters and dialogue that lingers. There’s a lot packed into this slim volume. I found myself rereading sections to catch missed clues, and it stayed with me long after I finished. Nothing is spelled out; the reader must engage and interpret. For those willing to descend with Jim, it’s a haunting, thought-provoking experience. WHY IT WAS SELECTED I just started reading it, and I kept reading. It's nothing more complicated than that. My flirtation with this book led to to purchase another book from this author. So far, it's dark and gritty and very out of my lane. I like getting out of my lane. READER CHALLENGE Pick up this book and give it a read. Meet me back here in late March and let's compare notes. TITLE: Rapture PUBLISHER: Independently Published AUTHOR: Steffen Jack GENRE(S): Literary Fiction/Horror PUBLICATION DATE: 3 March 2012 AMAZON REVIEWS/RATINGS AT DISCOVERY: 5/5.0 Star Average AMAZON KINDLE RANKING AT DISCOVERY: #1,559,151 WHY IT GOT MY ATTENTION: The author and I followed each other on X. This one has been out there since 2012 with only five reviews. The blurb didn't necessarily get my attention, but I saw nothing wrong with the sample. It had that gritty noir vibe with a great cover that matches. I feel like it hits effectively at the heart of its genre. DATE PLACED ON CANDIDATE LIST: 22 November 2025 STATUS: Scheduled for review for 27 March 2026 "RECOMMENDED" - A positive reading experience. This book provides the reader a satisfying experience, especially if the reader is already a fan the genre. This may not hold true for readers outside the genre. This book approaches the level of a contemporary traditionally-published book in its genre. This book met or exceeded the minimal editing quality of a traditionally published book. If spelling or mechanical errors were present, they were rare, hard to notice, and didn't detract from the novel's overall experience. The novel's structure (plot, characters, flow, dialogue, etc.) allowed reader to reasonably experience the story without unnecessary effort or distraction. The story met genre expectations, though did not necessarily bring anything new to the literary form. Click here to read more on Rule One Book Reviews rating system. TITLE: Hedgehogs: Zombie hogs attack in this hilarious horror comedy mashup PUBLISHER: Self-Published AUTHOR: Iseult Murphy GENRE(S): Comedy, Horror PUBLICATION DATE: July 26, 2022 AMAZON REVIEWS/RATINGS AT DISCOVERY: 34/4.6 Star Average AMAZON KINDLE RANKING AT DISCOVERY: #553,699 WHY IT GOT MY ATTENTION: This author and I are in the same X writing community, hence book cover popped up on my feed. The title is blatantly campy and is almost as long as the blurb. Hell, the title is the blurb. Come to think about it, with a title like that this book doesn't need a blurb. I'll tell you what this novella is, it's a 1980s straight-to-VHS-horror-flick. It's like Attack of the Killer Tomatoes, or The Evil Dead, or Fright Night. The cover hits all those feels dead-on (win). Sometimes horror is intentionally funny because it's so bad it falls into the campy realm. Horror is not easy to write, especially in this age of desensitized readers. Comedy is difficult enough on its own. Intentionally trying to make horror funny is EXCEEDINGLY DIFFICULT. I read the sample, expecting a big fail because, even for what appears to be a campy novella, this is ambitious project for any writer. What did I find? Tension, instant character development, and what might be a promising set-up. DATE PLACED ON CANDIDATE LIST: 14 July 2025 STATUS: Selected for February 2026 Review The ReviewBOTTOM LINE UP FRONT - Short but satisfying, Iseult Murphy's "Hedgehogs" is "The Secret of NIHM" meets "Dawn of the Dead." This novella is a fun and original take on the zombie genre for horror lovers, but not necessarily for those looking for a laugh. PLOT Harry is a hedgehog who lives in a burrow on the edge of a farmer's field. One night, a seductive aroma summons the hedgehogs to a midnight feast of dead bugs. Those that partake in this devil's dinner are transformed into bloodthirsty zombies. Somehow, Harry manages to override his instincts and resist the aroma's siren call. He flees across fields, roads, and ditches, with the hedgehog horde fast on his heels. Along the way, he desperately warns all he encounters, yet few listen and quickly meet their doom. Finally, Harry and several other creatures barricade themselves in a human lair and prepare for the zombie hedgehog apocalypse. Amazon lists this as a "Comedy Horror Mashup." I didn't find the story funny. The premise is clearly amusing, but the novella's execution was, in my opinion, fully serious. It wasn't that there were comedic setups that failed—there were no comedic setups at all. The author seemed to forget this was supposed to be a comedy and instead executed (and fairly well) a full-blown horror plot. The book may be campy in a 1980s straight-to-VHS way, but it's still straight-up horror. On the surface, the novella had the potential for absurdity, but the author executed it in a sincere manner, without a drop of tongue-in-cheek humor. And as the reader, I was good with that. I enjoyed the way it was written, and as I plowed through the story, I quickly forgot it was supposed to be comedic. THEMES The central theme of this novella is "RUN!"An underpinning theme is that when a terrified hedgehog goes running by, screaming warnings of impending zombie doom, one should listen. Once again, the premise is amusing, but the author infuses the concept with dead-serious terror. She doesn't treat the protagonist with anything except legitimate sincerity. Okay, there were other themes too. Murphy infuses positive elements of compassion, and even loyalty and friendship, into this unique novella. Harry forms temporary cross-species alliances with other creatures—like a fox and a cat—who band together to survive. I particularly enjoyed the budding friendship between Harry and the mouse Tina. Harry also represents themes of personal courage and listening to your better sense even when everyone around you is doing something you know isn't right. It's through listening to that inner voice of reason, and not giving in to blind instinct, that Harry avoids the dark fate that engulfs all the other hedgehogs. Maybe I'm overthinking this. On second thought, the only real theme here is "RUN!" CHARACTERS For serious horror, I would classify the character development in Hedgehogs as exactly what it should be. Murphy doesn't treat her protagonists with absurdity and only a touch of campiness. Harry is a hedgehog living his best hedgehog life on the edge of a farmer's field. Confronted with the horde of hedgehog cannibal undead, he flees in terror. Harry desperately doesn't want to become dinner—or a zombie. This is his entire character arc: don't die. Yet, packaged in this straightforward, seemingly two-dimensional character, Murphy builds surprising depth in a short period of time. The other creatures—mice, dog, cat, etc.—are like Harry: trapped within the confines of their species traits. They have to rise above these traits to cooperate and survive in an alliance of convenience. SETTING The novella takes place in rural/suburban environment amongst the small creatures, both wild and domestic. The setting is appropriately functional the plot, nothing more or less. STYLE, PACING AND LANGUAGE This is where Hedgehogs really shines. It moves—and moves fast—exactly like it should. Murphy never slows anything down for exposition or extended narrative. As a result, the book is charged with ample tension and suspense. I kept thinking, “Why are you stopping to warn these creatures, Harry? Don’t you know the zombies are right on your tail? Less talk, more Sonic! Dammit, run!” All the running culminates in a satisfying climax. The ending was appropriately campy, and I would not have been happy with any other ending. RECOMMENDATIONS
This book is firmly horror, and for readers who love horror. It hits right at the heart of the genre with an original and creative approach. Would Hedgehogs appeal to readers beyond the horror genre? Probably not. Someone reading the Amazon description looking for laughs will be disappointed. I think the novella would be better served if the title just said Hedgehogs. I also think this would make a good movie. If Pixar made horror, this would be their screenplay.Was I disappointed that the novella wasn’t a “hilarious mashup”? Not in the least, because I fully enjoyed the story Murphy delivered. The novella left me satisfied. The author clearly knows the horror genre, and this novella serves as a showcase for her writing skills. I look forward to reading more of this author’s work. WHY IT WAS SELECTED I really need a light, humorous read. My personal reading list has been heavy lately. I'm hoping this author delivers the diversion I'm looking for. I mean, c'mon, zombie hedgehogs! READER CHALLENGE Pick up this book and give it a read. Meet me back here in February and lets compare notes. TITLE: Hedgehogs: Zombie hogs attack in this hilarious horror comedy mashup PUBLISHER: Self-Published AUTHOR: Iseult Murphy GENRE(S): Comedy, Horror PUBLICATION DATE: July 26, 2022 AMAZON REVIEWS/RATINGS AT DISCOVERY: 34/4.6 Star Average AMAZON KINDLE RANKING AT DISCOVERY: #553,699 WHY IT GOT MY ATTENTION: This author and I are in the same X writing community, hence book cover popped up on my feed. The title is blatantly campy and is almost as long as the blurb. Hell, the title is the blurb. Come to think about it, with a title like that this book doesn't need a blurb. I'll tell you what this novella is, it's a 1980s straight-to-VHS-horror-flick. It's like Attack of the Killer Tomatoes, or The Evil Dead, or Fright Night. The cover hits all those feels dead-on (win). Sometimes horror is intentionally funny because it's so bad it falls into the campy realm. Horror is not easy to write, especially in this age of desensitized readers. Comedy is difficult enough on its own. Intentionally trying to make horror funny is EXCEEDINGLY DIFFICULT. I read the sample, expecting a big fail because, even for what appears to be a campy novella, this is ambitious project for any writer. What did I find? Tension, instant character development, and what might be a promising set-up. DATE PLACED ON CANDIDATE LIST: 14 July 2025 STATUS: Selected for February 2026 Review "STRONGLY RECOMMENDED" - A rewarding and memorable reading experience. This book provides the reader of any genre a deeply rich, rewarding and memorable experience. This novel fully met or exceeded the editing quality of traditionally published novels. Spelling or mechanical errors were virtually undetectable to the average reader. The novel's structure (plot, characters, flow, dialogue, etc) sweeps up the reader, exceeds genre expectations, and introduces a new dimension to the art form. Click here to read more on Rule One Book Reviews rating system. TITLE: All the King's Bastards PUBLISHER: Independently Published AUTHOR: G. Lawrence GENRE(S): Speculative Historical Fiction PUBLICATION DATE: June 11, 2025 AMAZON REVIEWS/RATINGS AT DISCOVERY: 19/4.4 Star Average AMAZON KINDLE RANKING AT DISCOVERY: #79,105 WHY IT GOT MY ATTENTION: Once again, the X algorithm served me a book post from an author account I did not follow. This one appeals directly to history buffs and sets its hooks into the reader's like me fast and hard. The cover is outstanding! It sets a mood that that reflects the book's content and vibe. The pitch is solid, but the sample really pulled me in. I was hit by some great lines in just the first few paragraphs to include this gem: "She supposed this was what they meant by pale as death, for nothing in life was this shade of white, this shade of white with a touch of grey." In only a few pages I came the conclusion this is a highly promising novel. DATE PLACED ON CANDIDATE LIST:7 July 2025 STATUS: Reviewed 21 January 2026 The ReviewBOTTOM LINE UP FRONT - Epic Alternate History, Exceptional Character-Driven Plot. As 2026 begins like 2025 ended, with a standout “Strongly Recommended” novel from a talented UK indie author. "All the King's Bastards" is a powerhouse of alternate-history fiction, featuring compelling characters and razor-sharp dialogue. Set during the Tudor period in England, the story opens with a gripping hook: the unexpected death of Henry VIII. From there, the novel plunges readers into a web of Machiavellian power plays vying for the empty throne. It builds relentlessly to a dramatic close, leaving England teetering on the brink of civil war and perfectly positioned for the sequel. Lawrence’s prose is top-shelf, and her characters feel fully realized and deeply human. These strengths, combined with the irresistible creative drama of “what could have been,” make this a must-read for fans of British royal dramas. Yet the novel’s appeal stretches far beyond that niche, and anyone who enjoys rich historical fiction and intense human drama will find it highly satisfying. PLOT What if? It's a timeless question, and the perfect spark for any writer to dive into the tantalizing realm of "what could have been." In "All the King's Bastards," author Gemma Lawrence masterfully blends history and fiction to explore an alternate timeline pivoting on one of the most impactful moments in British history. First, a quick recap of what really happened: In January 1536, Henry VIII, King of England, was thrown from his horse during a jousting tournament. He suffered severe injuries and lay unconscious for hours. Fearing for his life, his then-queen, pregnant Anne Boleyn miscarried their child shortly afterward. Henry recovered, but his marriage to Anne did not. She was eventually executed, Henry moved on to a new wife, and their daughter, Elizabeth, would one day become one of England's greatest monarchs. But what if Henry had died that day on the jousting field? That is precisely the question Lawrence tackles in "All the King's Bastards" (the first book in the "A Succession of Chaos" series). The novel opens with a pregnant Queen Anne Boleyn standing over her husband's still-warm body, mourning the man she loved while already calculating her next steps in a desperate bid to secure power. In the chaotic days and weeks that follow Henry's death, Anne fights to establish herself as regent: a placeholder and protector for her young daughter, Elizabeth, until the girl comes of age to claim the throne as queen. Anne leans heavily on the counsel of her late husband's trusted minister and spymaster, Thomas Cromwell, as she scrambles to build alliances and neutralize her enemies. Yet even Cromwell's loyalty casts a shadow of doubt. Tensions escalate as rival factions maneuver to place Mary, Henry's daughter by Catherine of Aragon, on the throne. Even Henry Fitzroy, Henry's bastard son and once a figure close to Anne, throws his hat into the ring to become king. Like pieces on a chessboard, the claimants advance and retreat through layers of personal ambition, betrayal, and political intrigue—sometimes as players, sometimes as pawns—until England teeters on the edge of civil war. THEMES The novel’s overarching themes are power, loyalty, and love, and the extreme lengths the powerful will go to seize and hold onto them. Lawrence explores these themes through her richly drawn characters. It was fascinating to see the loyalty that almost every side in the conflict for the throne had (or at least professed to have) toward their dead king, Henry VIII. While he was a great leader with a tremendous historical impact, he became something of a mess in his later years, leaving behind a trail of dead wives and dead political allies. His loyalty to those who served him was notoriously fickle. In Lawrence’s fictional timeline, however, Henry dies at the peak of his power and health (and with only one ex-wife), leaving a powerful, largely unspoiled legacy of loyalty to his memory among most of the characters. That kind of loyalty probably wouldn’t have survived had he died even a few years later. As a reader, you can always feel Henry VIII’s ghost looming behind many of the power moves the characters make. As for love, there’s a great deal of love of country and love of crown in this novel. Lawrence imbues the commoners with an unbridled passion for either Queen Anne or Queen Mary. That love, manipulated by several of the key players, leads to horrible violence before the novel is through. CHARACTERS This is a deeply character-driven novel. It’s the characters who make the story so compelling, with the rich historical backdrop serving merely as a wonderful bonus. Lawrence takes her characters seriously and invests tremendous care in breathing life into them from the very first moment the reader encounters them. She achieves this through a skillful balance of dialogue, narrative description, and internal monologue.The author carefully balances this literary triad in every chapter, never relying too heavily on any one element. Instead, she spreads them thoughtfully to create a well-rounded, authentic view of each character. She never force-feeds the reader information, but instead builds her characters gradually, layer by layer, from one encounter to the next. The following excerpt from "All the King's Bastards" features George Boleyn, Anne’s brother, as he reflects on his wife, Jane. It’s an excellent example of Lawrence’s prose and the subtle, masterful way she develops her characters: “Oddly, at such times, he missed Jane. When he slept beside her, he never woke in the night, never had bad dreams. Sometimes when he woke, he would find himself wrapped about her, and she nestled into him as if he was protecting her and she him, as if in sleep and dreams they knew this solid truth of mutual protection, of the worth of being cherished and could find one another, true souls touching. It was as if she sheltered him from all the demons chasing him in the night. There was in him at such times an understanding that when he was with her, he was where he was supposed to be. Something about Jane felt like home. He did not want to lose that, and yet he never seemed able to treat her well.” — All the King's Bastards: A Succession of Chaos by G. Lawrence https://a.co/aWXPrOl Some of the key players, and rivals for the throne, in this novel are Mary Tudor (daughter of Henry’s first wife, Catherine of Aragon), Henry FitzRoy (Henry’s illegitimate son by one of his many mistresses), and Anne Boleyn herself. Anne, Mary, and Henry FitzRoy become the major chess pieces set in motion after the king’s death, with nearly every other character hinging their plots, fortunes, and fates around these three. Queen Anne Boleyn is the primary protagonist: an intelligent, strong-willed, deeply flawed, and vulnerable woman caught in a time of titanic political, social, and religious upheaval. Fate hands her a once-in-a-lifetime moment where the entire future of England rests in her hands. It’s all hers—and her infant daughter Elizabeth’s—if she can hold it. Anne seeks the throne for many reasons, not the least of which is sheer personal survival. One of the most compelling aspects of her character is her fierce motherly instinct. Protecting her daughter Elizabeth becomes one of her primary motivations, and she draws profound inspiration and strength from the little girl. Lawrence shows us Anne at a time when she still genuinely loved and trusted her husband Henry—the very man who, in real history, would eventually have her executed. It is from this place of love and loyalty that her story begins, and that starting point is what makes Anne (and every character) so intriguing. Anne makes mistakes. She lives in constant fear for Elizabeth’s safety. She commits to actions based on incomplete information. She relies heavily on councilors (men and women alike) she isn’t entirely sure she can trust (and some of them ultimately betray her.) The same depth and care Lawrence pours into Anne, she extends equally to the myriad other characters in this story (and there are legion of them). There are no minor, “throwaway” characters here. While much of the plot centers on royalty, one of Lawrence’s strongest and most affecting story arcs follows a commoner: the child Magpye. Magpye is the daughter of an innkeeper, and through her family we see how these royal upheavals ripple down to the streets of London and affect ordinary people. I loved reading about these historical figures with little prior knowledge of who they really were, then finishing the novel and going back to do actual research to see how close the author came to plausibility. In hindsight, I have to say Lawrence did an outstanding job extrapolating each real historical figure into a believable, fully fleshed-out fictional character starting from that fateful moment in January 1536 when a king fell from his horse. SETTING Here and there, almost without the reader even noticing it at first, Lawrence quietly turns Tudor England into a character in its own right. She takes us on an immersive tour: from the earthy, fresh scent of a commoner’s garden in the morning mist, to the oppressive, claustrophobic feel of London’s narrow streets hemmed in by overhanging timber-framed buildings. This excerpt is a great example of how Lawrence brings 1536 Tudor England vividly to life: “He had never liked the River Thames, Chapuys thought as nervously he waited on his barge hovering off the Water Gate of the Tower. It was so grey and choppy, even on a good day when one could see the fish swimming beneath the water, it still seemed an angry river, dark of mood and ominous of intent. It was not a river that would flood often, it was true, not one to rush into the city, but still, there always seemed something resentful about it, a simmering rage kept captive just under the lapping skin of the water, as if something buried there long ago had not died but haunted the river, waiting for a chance to return.” — All the King's Bastards: A Succession of Chaos by G. Lawrence https://a.co/5Oq8unE STYLE, PACING AND LANGUAGE The greatest challenge I faced as a reader not intimately familiar with the Tudor period, or all the historical figures from that era, was simply keeping everyone and everything straight in my head. As someone who isn’t particularly drawn to this chapter of history, it would have been easy to feel overwhelmed by the sheer number of characters, the layers of plots and plots-within-plots, and just give up, DNF the book and move on to something else. For that reason, I almost didn’t add Lawrence’s novel to my reading list. But I picked up "All the King's Bastards" because the excellent prose grabbed me right from the start. As I kept reading, the book never disappointed. The following excerpt is a perfect example of Lawrence’s writing style, and the main reason this novel was so good: “People think death is one moment, and perhaps for the person who has died this is so, but for those left behind, death never ends. The dead die, and the living live with death then always in their lives. It is the space left behind when a loved one leaves, the shadow always missing at one’s side. It is the gap in heart, in mind, in the daylight and night that a person leaves behind. It is the silence when their voice might have answered. Never does it leave, never does it go.” — All the King's Bastards: A Succession of Chaos by G. Lawrence https://a.co/2MN3R2a The author helped the reader keep track of each character by clearly stating—in the chapter title—which character’s POV or story arc was primary for that chapter, along with where and when the action was taking place. This simple structural technique made it easy for me to flip back, re-read sections, and get everyone and everything straight in my head. About a quarter of the way through the book, it let me lock the entire cast into place so I could finally relax and truly enjoy the novel. Lawrence also keeps the chapters short, which was especially helpful during the dialogue-heavy first half, when so much of the action consisted of people “talking in castles.” That phrase—“talking in castles”—pretty much defines this period of history and this genre of literature for me, and it’s usually a huge personal turn-off. It’s exactly why I tend to avoid books about the British monarchy. Let me be blunt: I’m a Neanderthal American guy with a severe allergy to Masterpiece Theatre, frilly collars, puffy shirts, “M'Lord” this and “'M'Lady” that. My eyes glaze over instantly. So it’s no small feat that Lawrence burned right through my neanderthal prejudices and kept me turning pages. I’m glad she did, because the novel’s second half picks up speed dramatically, and all that “talking in castles” in the first half pays off in spades. On a related note, I went into this novel expecting a heavily female-oriented story written primarily for female readers. That’s not at all what Lawrence delivered. "All the King's Bastards" gives us excellently written, three-dimensional protagonists, antagonists, and supporting characters of both genders—realistic, well-balanced, free of stereotypes, and historically-appropriate. Men who enjoy history and alternate history might find this novel enjoyable. Also of note, the novel is light on romance/sex, graphic violence, and profanity. RECOMMENDATIONS "All the King's Bastards" is a well-written alternate-history novel of power, love, loyalty, and betrayal, set at one of the most pivotal crossroads in British history. Excellent prose, sharp dialogue, and deeply compelling characters grab the reader’s attention from the start, while the steadily building plot and mounting tension keep it locked in place. Author G. Lawrence’s tale of rival factions battling for the throne in the chaotic aftermath of Henry VIII’s untimely death is clearly a must-read for fans of British royal historical fiction. Yet it reaches far beyond that niche—it will likely appeal to any history buff or anyone who loves intricate intrigue and richly character-driven stories.
For all these reasons, "All the King's Bastards" by G. Lawrence earns a well-deserved “Strongly Recommended” rating. Happy New Year! Welcome back to Rule One Book Reviews. Rule One survived 2025, and I'm still reading and reviewing. We're kicking off 2026 with three new review candidates. A few notes: In most cases, review candidates stay on the list indefinitely or until selected. I can foresee a day when the candidate list reaches hundreds. With that said, does anyone else out there like to read and review books? I would really like to post more reviews, but time is my enemy. I'm looking for quality writers who want to craft high-quality, in-depth book reviews. My vision is to one day have a small volunteer staff (this is not a business, nor will it ever be) of reviewers who each specialize in a genre. Interested? See the contact form at the bottom of this post, and I will be in touch. Now, on to the candidates! INDIE BOOK REVIEW CANDIDATE #030 TITLE: Where the Clouds Catch Flame (Clouds Aflame Book 1) PUBLISHER: Independently Published AUTHOR: M.J. Piazza GENRE(S): Christian Historical Fiction PUBLICATION DATE: 1 January 2019 AMAZON REVIEWS/RATINGS AT DISCOVERY: 39/4.7Star Average AMAZON KINDLE RANKING AT DISCOVERY: #1,325,982 WHY IT GOT MY ATTENTION: I was just browsing X and the Algorithm show me a post from this author, whom I did not follow. I clicked on the Amazon product page directly from the author's X profile and went right to the sample. It was cleanly-written prose with an immediately engaging hook. I went back and read the blurb, and thought it deserved a chance. DATE PLACED ON CANDIDATE LIST: 1 January 2026 STATUS: Active INDIE BOOK REVIEW CANDIDATE #031 TITLE: Whispers of the Storm PUBLISHER: Independently Published AUTHOR: Z.B. Steele GENRE(S): Fantasy PUBLICATION DATE: 25 March 2025 AMAZON REVIEWS/RATINGS AT DISCOVERY: 266/4.4 Star Average AMAZON KINDLE RANKING AT DISCOVERY:#32,944 WHY IT GOT MY ATTENTION: Someone I follow on X had reposted this. Then I realized this author and I already follow one another. I guess the algorithm has been keeping us apart (damn you, algorithm!). This indie has many reviews with good ratings and respectable sales, so word of mouth appears promising. The opening dialogue is good with quick character-builds and plot immersion. It feels very "conventional fantasy trope", but reads like it's executed properly by a writer who understands and loves the genre. DATE PLACED ON CANDIDATE LIST: 1 January 2026 STATUS: Active INDIE BOOK REVIEW CANDIDATE #032 TITLE: Blood Memory PUBLISHER: Wargate (small publisher) AUTHOR: Philip Voodoo GENRE(S): Military Thrilller PUBLICATION DATE: 5 December 2025 AMAZON REVIEWS/RATINGS AT DISCOVERY: 12/4.9 Star Average AMAZON KINDLE RANKING AT DISCOVERY:#79,093 WHY IT GOT MY ATTENTION: The author came up randomly on my X feed, and the post had nothing to do with his book. I followed the comments down, as he interacted with the commenters. Eventually, he posted a link to his book. I clicked, of course, and browsed the sample. The book started better than most military thrillers. It had an understated realism to the hook. The protagonist was tired, tired in a way someone who has been in a military transport in a far-away land, with a mission waiting for him upon landing, could understand. I want to read more. DATE PLACED ON CANDIDATE LIST: 1 January 2026 STATUS: Active Thank you to all the readers and authors who have either visited or been a part of Rule One Book Reviews this year. Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to all of you. See you in 2026 with more books to talk about.
2025 Book of the YearMerry Christmas and Happy New Year from Rule One Book Reviews! I'm happy to announce "This Burdened Clay" by Thomas Norford is the Rule One Book Reviews Novel of the Year for 2025. It won this by having the highest review recommendation of all the books reviewed this year, STRONGLY RECOMMENDED. I wish I had a prize or a fancy sticker he could slap on his cover. Maybe next year. My hearty congratulations will have to suffice. Thank you to all the readers who visited Rule One Book Reviews (ROBR) in its inaugural year. I'd also like to thank the authors for writing the novels I've enjoyed so much. ROBR's first organic review debuted 7 August, with Dragons in the Dungeons. We've posted one review a month since then, plus one special review. In the 6 months since I've been posting ROBR's readership has gone from about 3 viewers a day to about 50. Some of the books below have seen measurable spikes in Amazon reviews and sales since the review debuted. Is that attributable to their review here on ROBR? I don't know, but I'd like to think it is. There is only one way to find out - post more reviews. I plan to review twelve novels in 2026, plus at least two Special Reviews. The first review o 2026 will be "All The King's Bastards" by G. Lawrence, which will be posted in January. Also expect another round of review candidates early in the new year. In the meantime, I've provided a list of the year's reviews, as well as all the current review candidate books that will carry over to 2026. Please browse the titles and maybe you'll find a book or maybe one that might make a good Christmas gift for that special reader in your life. 2025 Book Reviews RecapSpecial Reviews Scheduled for 2026I'm officially "fan-boying" these two authors. I've picked up more of their books and plan to read and review them in the coming year as "Special Reviews" - dates TBD. Special Reviews are above and beyond the regular review line-up. I'm reading another Susana Imaginario book because she scratches my mythology itch. I'm reading the sequel to Richard Massie's The Cube because the first novel built a fantasy world and characters so compelling I have to return. 2025 Candidates Carried Over to 2026These novels are still eligible for a book review. Keep an eye on them, because they may still show up in 2026 with a review.
WHY IT WAS SELECTED This one has been in the back of my mind since I first read the sample, and it earned its review strictly on its sample. I hope it doesn't disappoint. I was going to get to it earlier, but I'm glad I held off so I can use this review to kick off 2026. Expect this review later in the month of January because the holidays have me completely overwhelmed. I'm going to have to revert to my typical slow-reading style. READER CHALLENGE My reader challenge is always the same - read this book and meet me back here in January and let's compare notes. TITLE: All the King's Bastards PUBLISHER: None AUTHOR: G. Lawrence GENRE(S): Speculative Historical Fiction.(multiple sub-genres) PUBLICATION DATE: June 11, 2025 AMAZON REVIEWS/RATINGS AT DISCOVERY: 19/4.4 Star Average AMAZON KINDLE RANKING AT DISCOVERY: #79,105 WHY IT GOT MY ATTENTION: Once again, the X algorithm served me a book post from an author account I did not follow. This one appeals directly to history buffs and sets its hooks into the reader's like me fast and hard. The cover is outstanding! It sets a mood that that reflects the book's content and vibe. The pitch is solid, but the sample really pulled me in. I was hit by some great lines in just the first few paragraphs to include this gem: "She supposed this was what they meant by pale as death, for nothing in life was this shade of white, this shade of white with a touch of grey." In only a few pages I came the conclusion this is a highly promising novel. DATE PLACED ON CANDIDATE LIST:7 July 2025 STATUS: Scheduled for January 2026 Review |
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